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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
He grew suspicious of the cattiness of women wondering if they were secretly conspiring to test his affection for the brunette most likely the redhead was just jealous that her overt sexuality hadn't won him over sure he was attracted to the red, but not one thing interesting had ever fluttered from her misanthropic lips he found the brunette's shyness more alluring and though she said little, this made the softly spoken spartan words all the more captivating as if every story she told was a great beginning for a new poem or book he thought of composing the harder the red tried to taunt and tease him with her boasts of physical achievements and sparse diet, the less attractive she became noticing interest waning, she let her hair down and dove in the pool, dripping wet and slick he could only think of the next time he would see the brunette again |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this very much, the way you chose to compare how these women affected you. The ending was perfect! |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
yeah, I just wish the "affair" was going as well as my writing. I wrote more after the ending but got rid of it because my instincts were right the first time |
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