Open Poetry #45 |
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Consensual Sax |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast ![]() |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am a real believer of consensual sax - and I am a real believer in your poetry. This is sultry and smooth. A |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast |
Well, my dear, I am a real believer in believers like you. How could I not? "And every time I've held a rose |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
![]() Yay! Let's be friends. Consensual friends, of course. A |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast |
Of course. "And every time I've held a rose |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I think there is nothing more sensual than the sounds of a saxaphone. It's a gutteral sound that evokes our basic desires and brings them out....you express it very well. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Yes! a smooth fitting of sax and sweltering romance. Cute title, as well. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the last 3 lines of this are stunningly ambiguous -- clever write...soft and mellow |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Ha! What a treat! You have posted one of my very favorite poems! I did not know what I would find, but then here it is! Huggs Jan |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Nice, smoothe, and Saxxy. Well done, (Just the way I like em) Tracey |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
OldPoet - now just add one consensual guitar with that sax, and amazing things can happen... BC |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You already had me with the title but the write is totally cool! Nothing better than good sax, especially consensual sax. ![]() |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast |
Guitar? Ok Bill, you got it. "And every time I've held a rose |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this very much so.... ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~poet... love, love your title ![]() very clever...beautiful images here! ~s |
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rachaelfuchsberger![]()
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
The thought of consensual sax is very alluring. Just like this piece. Arana Darkwolf |
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