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Open Poetry #45

The Path To Her

rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

0 posted 2009-07-07 02:58 AM

(V1.)
I've made so many stupid mistakes
So many things I cannot change
What would I do if I could turn back time?
What parts would I rearrange?

Because now she is here before me
and she's giving me the chance
to make my wildest dreams come true
to make real this beautiful romance

(Ch.)
Am I worthy of her love?
Do I deserve to own her heart?
If the path behind me is made of mistakes
Then where does the path to her start?

(V2.)
I can't take back what I've done wrong
though I tell myself I would if I could
but when she is standing here in front of me
I wonder if I should

Cuz she is offering me her heart in her hand
Her love is showing me the way
Can I escape the wreckage I've left behind?
Should I go forward or should I stay?

If I go forward, will she stay?

(Chorus then fade)

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2009-07-07 03:05 AM

~Great Song Jeff!

Do you sing? or play an instrument?
~ARH

I dream in fantasy, because reality is scary~Millette (ARH)

rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

2 posted 2009-07-07 05:55 AM

I sing (LOVE to sing lol) and I play a little bit of piano. Most of my poems come out as songs because I find myself "singing" them as lyrics as I write them - acapella even though I sometimes hear the music in my head

Tara Simms Hall
Member

since 2001-11-07

Posts 87
South Carolina

3 posted 2009-07-07 04:35 PM

I love this..the questions, the yearning...it pulls at me.

Tara

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2009-11-15 02:21 AM

enjoyed..would love to hear you singing this Jeffrey!

We can't change the past...can't pick up the wreckage we've left--but we can make the present/future what the past should've been.

risk in love my friend. It's the only way to truly live.

lv,g

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-11-18 05:58 PM

Enjoyed...James

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