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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-10-20 11:51 PM

You tasted like vodka mixed with human
I hadn't expected it to be that nice
you laughed and told me yes I did, knowing I was lying

I stood with you for hours
waiting for strangers to dissolve into the night
like salt in a glass of water
I tasted your sterilized lips then
and regretted it for two years

I still remember that foolish night
when I see a woman with a similar build
or a delicate nose and slender lips
eyes that could sandblast the sadness from the earth
with delicate grains of quartz.

________________________________
Bad Habits.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2009-11-16 06:34 AM

You have to watch out for those bad habits~~ they can cost you dearly

M

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-11-16 10:55 AM

I can't believe I missed this one. Thank you, Maureen, for bringing it back to the top.

Paul, you write good stuff.

A

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-11-17 04:10 AM

Paul, you come up with the most brilliant and unique descriptions!

i.e.

"eyes that could sandblast the sadness from the earth
with delicate grains of quartz."

~ Gosh, yer good!

Linda

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2009-11-17 10:39 AM

Maureeeeeeeenie... I was a little surprised that somebody resurrected this one. I had thought nobody liked it.

Thanks for reading. What, exactly, will my bad habits cost me?

Alaboohooo, lovely, thanks very much. Always encouraging. Uncommonly wonderful. Thank you for reading. I'm glad you found this one.

Linda, thanks! I appreciate the kind words. Glad you enjoyed.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2009-11-18 08:32 AM

quote:
eyes that could sandblast the sadness from the earth
with delicate grains of quartz.

Delightful thought, dear Paul. That's worth even a regret or two I guess.
Love,
Margopargo

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

6 posted 2009-11-18 05:02 PM

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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