Touch Magic (Trilonnet - Poetry Workshop)

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Open Poetry #45

Touch Magic (Trilonnet - Poetry Workshop)

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-07-07 02:18 AM

Touch Magic

Spruce branches block intrusive light
while shadows blanket empty space
creating magic in the air.

Hibiscus dance into the night
as silk worms tat long spider lace
and chant songs of a princess fair.

Sporadic kisses painted bright
enchanting touch on fairy’s face
delivers hope - so much to share.

These wonders are not hard to find;
they form and breathe within our minds.

Alison

[This message has been edited by Alison (07-07-2009 10:39 AM).]

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-07-07 06:25 AM

dear Alison, this is exquisite, leave a sensorial and wonderful sentiment...Thanks for the beautiful poem.

yann

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-07-07 10:40 AM

yann,

I thank you. I am always delighted by your replies.

xoxoxo
Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-07-07 11:39 AM

Alison Poetess, this is simply delightful. I see the rhyme scheme, though I did not know of this trilonnet form. I think you did this masterfully.

Love,
Margherita

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-07-07 12:47 PM

Ali, you wear the workshop well.

I especially liked these lines:

"These wonders are not hard to find;
they form and breathe within our minds."

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