Open Poetry #45 |
Bones and The Kid In The Wheel Chair |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones is rough and mean as he can be. He has this soft spot though, for a kid in a wheelchair. Bones sees that the kid gets around. Bones wheels him up and down the street. People in the playground are beginning to talk, wanting to know what’s going on there. Bones doesn’t care, Bones is Bones, and everyone else had better believe it. Bones and his friend in the wheel chair don’t need to explain themselves to anyone. Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That's right. Happy Independence, Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
good one!! [all individuals should be considered 'of significant value' and diversity (in any form) should be celebrated] applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Kacy, Happy Independence Day to you. You're right, it is right. The kids in this hood never cease to amaze me. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bruce, I'm very pleased that you enjoyed this poem. You are of course correct in your comments. Bobby |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Another side of Bones. Beautifully laid out. Soft and heart touching. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Poddarku, I'm very happy that you feel that way about the poem. Many people that have had Bones experiences feel deeply about other people. Thank you for your kind words. Bobby |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~yo, dear bobby... i was going to comment on this, but you've summed it all up exactly in the above reply. love, shellie |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - I knew there was a soft place somewhere inside Bones, this I'm seeing is just one of them... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bobby, a lot of respect in this poem...Bones is generous. thanks for the poem. yann |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like Bones. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Shellie, For reading and commenting. Those two guys were out on the playground last night. They get together fairly often. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, Bones is a good kid in many ways. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, I'm glad that you saw the poem that way. Thanks for your kind words. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, Yes, Bones is one of the good guys. Thanks for liking Bones. Love Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Glad to hear that Bones was able to help someone who needed help. Ida |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Bones is awesome. Every kid in a wheel chair should have a friend like Bones. Arana Darkwolf |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, They have a good friendship. It all involves talking. Bones and the kid both need someone to talk to. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Arana, Perhaps Bones will start some organization to do that. Love Bobby |
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