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DrK&7 Junior Member
since 2009-07-01
Posts 40 |
On a quiet ship, in a quiet sea, on a quiet day, in world of calm. On a quiet moment, I believe in free, on a quiet realization, I learn it's me. In my silence I am strongest, In my raucous I am weakest, In my reflection I am wisest, In my ambition I am clueless. On a quiet day, I find myself found. In my world of what if, in my universe of maybe, I am groping and trying, to find it, it'll save me. Lost in my dreams, and soaked in my fears, I resort to my quietness, my own very warm tears. The day is closing over me, The sky is dimming fast, The night is all I can see, But somewhere I see my past. It is happy yet puzzling- It is sad yet dazzling- It is beautiful yet horrid- It is liquid yet it is solid. And I return from this dream, I open my eyes, and suddenly I scream, And away it all flies. I was on a quiet sea, I was on a quiet ship. I was on a quiet place, I was only on a drip. So now I'm in the real world. And my dreams of quiet and peace, Have yet to be unfurled. Yet silence in reflection, have yet to know release. So finally I ask you, Is it really true? Do you believe in quietness? Do you believe in free? Do you believe in blissfullness? And will you please believe in me? [This message has been edited by DrK&7 (07-02-2009 11:22 AM).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~Another Great Post! |
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DrK&7 Junior Member
since 2009-07-01
Posts 40 |
Thank You Very Much! [This message has been edited by DrK&7 (07-02-2009 10:26 AM).] |
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DrK&7 Junior Member
since 2009-07-01
Posts 40 |
I really appreciate feedback! |
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