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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Ok, it's been years (um, about 7 years) since I've written poetry. Tonight, I was determined to write SOMETHING before going to bed. Below is the first attempt after a long dry spell. Be gentle. LOL Sticky love triangle Who will lose in the end? One destined as lover One relegated to friend What will it cost her To have her heart’s desire? Can she be satisfied with ice Or will she choose fire? Caught between two worlds… It’s beyond all reason Listen to her head Or commit soul treason? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Tara.. a lovely gifting! Am pleased for you that you have come back to write for us here.. I know what you mean about not writing, my muse only just returned yesterday! lol I like your poem.. "soul treason".. it's always difficult but somehow I think you may already know the answer  I wish you a good night's rest lovely girl.  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh boy, it's a nice treat to find your name here again! You've been gone too long, Tara. This is a fine write that underscores the sticky thoughts and questions, should I or shouldn't I? Welcome home, lady. |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
It's so good to be back! I've spent the last week or so rereading all my postings...and realizing how much I've missed this part of my life. I almost posted this in Teen since it's inspired by the Twilight series. LOL |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Tara, you have a gift to share, the wording has life and gentle muse of the heart, Bloodline |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great write, dear Tara! I think many can relate. Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Caught between two worlds…" easy to understand ~~ Nice to read you again M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome back, Tara! "Caught between two worlds…" ~ Ah, yes! Decisions, decisions! Isn't it great to have the ability to pick up a pen and write down your thoughts!  Giving you a warm, welcome-back pip hug, EA |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
7 years Tara? Wow. That's one huge writer's block. Glad you came out of it. I bet the words will come like a torrent now. Oh yeah and, I liked the soul treason line too. Excellent. |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Chalmette Guy, I'm working on it slowly. You know what they say...use it or lose it. Gotta build up the poetic muscle that's atrophied over the years. Thank you for your comments, everyone. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I don't know if I've met you, Tara, but I enjoyed your return. Ida |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Ida, thank you for the read! Tara |
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