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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you didn't often say much about your heart felt or those other kinds of feelings you had when you wore the sun dress kind of smile and walked along the window side of my ocean usually around sunset with the sun behind you so there was not doubt that you were all woman there was always something special in your eyes like they could be hands that could be held if a lover was gentle enough just long enough and on occasion you would just stand there letting me take my time to get to know you wordless it seemed you wore your boxes with the tops off and so easy to reach into _____________ daark |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, that title sure drew me in! (I've been known to "off" my own wings from time to time! lol Seriously speaking, your poetry shows a deep respect for ~ and understanding and appreciation of ~ women. And your talent for expressing those, is truly outstanding.  a woman [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-01-2009 09:25 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such a lovely thought: may we often wear that kind of smile, the sun would warm the hearts, even if it was behind clouds... quote: You have a keen understanding of women: that's the sweet time indeed, when we can relax and nourish our dreams ... quote: A wonderfully poetic expression! And may there be more lovers "gentle enough just long enough". May they hear! quote: Wordless transparency is a most precious way to be understood. Beautiful, most beautiful, dear Poet. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms EA thank you special angel for the comments and for being a woman ____________ Ms Mar thank you lady and woman for your love eyes here |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
still looking for the station that's all big daddy all the time I could dance to that. Margherita stole all my highlights. nicely nicely D H |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
beautiful... |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Loved this one, trying to find a favourite part, but to me this is incredibly good: "wordless it seemed you wore your boxes with the tops off and so easy to reach into" Stunning poesy ! Heart2Heart |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ubp..thanks for the eyes babe!! ______________ ms browneyes..thank you for looking over this way __________________ ms heart..thank you so much for your read and comment |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think I fell in love with this poem. A |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~i can't stop coming back to this... : ) it cannot be picked apart for consideration...it must be experienced as a whole...so no quotes...lol ~s |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
there was always something special in your eyes like they could be hands that could be held if a lover was gentle enough just long enough I don't think I could ever choose a favorite from your poems... but this is certainly in the upper echelon. *S* Beautiful!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you little one...I enjoy your soft fuzzy footprints here _______________ ms browneyes, thank you for taking it all in, I appreciate your glances ____________________ ms van, thanks ms __________________ ms suthern, thank you lady friend for the smile words |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
*sigh* just beautiful Mr Daark... Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks lady freind |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
such a perfect time for slowly unwrapping the box of your word gifts. Miss you, D. Hope you find something fun under the Christmas tree! Indigo |
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