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Blue Skies |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
The myriad of melancholic phrases that once dripped from my tongue like so much bitter sweet honey now drip drip from the empty slip of that passing ship her name surrounds me like a swarm there is no sting adrift bereft floating on blue rippled mist too cool to feel anything but space too blind to see anything but the clouds above free and easy oh so easy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely. A name can do that! Love, Margherita |
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DrK&7 Junior Member
since 2009-07-01
Posts 40 |
Interesting, but I don't quite understand it. Enlighten me, please  |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
her name was Skye if that helps |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW, I really like this! Thank goodness for the archives! |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
i felt myself relax into the current of your lovely words. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with Midnitesun! WOW ARCTIC WIND |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very poignant write |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
her name surrounds me like a swarm there is no sting ________________________ this is my fav write of yours |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
martini, this lovely poem reads ~ "free and easy oh so easy" ~ and makes me smile. As I read in your reply, her name is "Skye". It is a beautiful name and was one of the ones that I had originally chosen for my youngest of two daughters.   Linda |
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