Open Poetry #45 |
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Full Moon Mood |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
![]() Some will think of a blue moon to bring sighs Others may long for the Lover's moon day Ocean tides flow to and fro as moonrise Beckons the compass of my soul survey, Pinpoint, it's heartstring arrow deep inline Where your soft breast rhythmicly drums sweet verse And kiss you into a breathless mood rhyme Beyond the boundries mere words will converse To loose the body of all weight of self And breathe release from false fabric till bare We tiptoe into salient waters, elf Together a mischievous Voltaire. My Dear why not act upon a romance whim? Lets treat ourselves to a moonlight swim! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh I just loved this, I love anything that involves the moon, I must be part werewolf...or a female wolverine...lol... Your poem was very beautiful and touching, I love to read you! What words can I say that could paint the beauty of your work? **Where your soft breast rhythmicly drums sweet verse And kiss you into a breathless mood rhyme Beyond the boundries mere words will converse To loose the body of all weight of self~loved these lines especially!!!!!!! ...now you have me in a moon mood... ~ARH |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Well tis a good time for a moon mood, saw near full moon this morning in the hazey fog of first light, was alight in glow with peeping dawn, lovely indeed, many thanks Romantic Heart, Bloodline |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the romance, both your poem and the picture put me in the mood. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you've chosen a very cool pic for this write..."kiss you into a breathless mood rhyme"...and, that is such a romantically lovely line...nice write |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Oh yes I long for all of this, beguiling words Bloodline, was with you the whole way :-) And the picture is gorgeous of course ! Heart2Heart |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful weave of poem and picture... pure delight! *S* |
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