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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the conjur woman counted the days for me yesterday and said it will always be the month of never so I guess I can wait until twelve arrives since on those later morning afternoons I still see you meandering your coffee like the columbia does her lazy woman languid just being close enough to be close enough sometimes I can taste the air that spills from the side of your nonchalant glances but your natural white bondage seems so luxurious and even occasionally ladylike and proper in that we both imagine your ropes more silken and your blindfolds more of a velvet nature than just being the other's hands holding us back lest we should celebrate our celibacy separately before the eyes of an astonished gravel god _________________ daark |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
As usual and expected, my friend...wonderful. j. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
You need to hook up once and for all. I feel your wanting, and can hardly wait to read what happens when you finally get the girl. Tracey. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
jwesley..thanks amigo, I appreciate your comments.. _______________ wt..well she will read your comment and roll her eyes and grin at the tattoo of her husband and nine kids and then offer me the finger as usual...but then that is what true love is right? thanks guy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: ... indeed, who could be more astonished than him? Your celebrations might be stirring enough to gift him with emotions ... What visions you convey! Indifference is impossible, even for the gravel god ... You are so good! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...sweet lady friend you bless me with your reads and comments..gravel gods are the shoulders of highways that often determine the fate of those who ride the metal horses..they say if a rider worships the curves too often, the gravel gods will take him or her to the valley of stones.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
just being close enough to be close enough sometimes I can taste the air that spills from the side of your nonchalant glances I swear your pen is filled with magic, not ink. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern...humble thanks lady friend |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I missed reading your poetry - maybe the trip would not have been so difficult if I had not had to go cold turkey. You weave erotic, beauty and sensuality like no artist I have seen or read. A |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
wow... "like the columbia does her lazy woman languid" ...such rich word choices...excellent |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..did you trip? toe ok? how far did you fall? thanks babe ________________ steavenr, thanks amigo.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the month of never.... dang D, I love that line, and sometimes that month never seems to get here either.  I always enjoy the trip and journey through your words. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Unruly waters often run deep under languid rivers. Who can fathom their night long struggles of whirlpool logic? Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks GS...you smile me ________________ ms indi..wet is wet yes? thanks babe |
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