Open Poetry #45 |
Sunset Harbour |
Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Dingle, Ireland The evening sun slants golden rays Across the dappled sea To glint upon the fishing boats Moored safely by the quay The gentle lapping of the waves Against old molo wall Is echoing the soothing sound Of tides that ebb and fall There's seaweed tangled in old rope On craft that creak and sway And in the air and on my lips The taste of salty spray The flowers close their petalled cups The breeze is just a sigh A homing bird in lonesome flight Lets out a wistful cry Cliffs stand out in silhouette Against the fading light Dusk gives way to subtle shades Merging into night Everything is hushed and still Bathed in the afterglow Then one by one the stars appear To gaze on earth below Now the moon above the trees Her pale face shyly peeps Clouds break softly in the sky The world in silence sleeps A time to quietly reflect As I go on my way When night descends upon the bay To embrace departing day |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
A sweet music of muse and melody, a place to calm the spirit, Lovely Heart2Heart, Bloodline |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh, this is a delight to read, dear H2H! Beautifully done, made me perceive your emotions as if they were my own. Love, Margherita ps oh and I love to "meet" you, that's a beautiful picture. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Just beautiful, the painting and the poetry....you know I have been a fan of yours, I always read what you post, I like your poetry, I guess I feel like we are kindred spirits, like-minded, poetic sisters... Some people you just feel that special closeness too, you have been one of them from day one! Hope to read more from you....you are very inspiring! Love and Hugs ~ARH |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks Bloodline for lovely reply. Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Margherita, the pleasure is mine, to write poetry and get such wonderful and enthusiastic replies is just so wonderful. Thank you. Yes, that's me in my thinking corner:-) Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
ARH, that is a very sweet and kind reply, thanks ever so much. Heart2Heart |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Everything is hushed and still Bathed in the afterglow Then one by one the stars appear To gaze on earth below I just love the way your poems flow Heart2Heart, a real plesure to read. Thanks for sharing. Love Lindsay |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is so beautiful. Both, the picture and the poem. I truly enjoyed it. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"There's seaweed tangled in old rope On craft that creak and sway And in the air and on my lips The taste of salty spray" to You've just described one of my night dreams. What a beautiful well written piece you've given us to read! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Musical, magical poetry. I am becoming one of your biggest fans. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks Lindsay ! Likewise I'm sure :-) Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Oklahoma Rose, that's a very nice comment, thank you ! Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Midnitesun, thanks again for your sweet reply. I feel so privileged staying in the beautiful place by the sea that I do. Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you Chalmette, that's like music in my ears :-) Heart2Heart |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I just can't get enough of your beautiful poetry, Heart2Heart. Ida |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
You bestow great honour on me with your lovely comments Marchmadness, thank you ever so much. Heart2Heart |
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