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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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 Acquainted with suffering shoulders hold the world Bent with their worries no room for her own Searching for exit signs above doorways And trapdoors in hallways She came in somehow There has to be a way out of this and that |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Like a dream where you can't move fast enough. neat poem~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I do like this lovely gifting from you Tina.. I am saving it to my library to enjoy another read later.. thank you  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Tina, Your first strophe say it the way it should be. I like that. Love Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A fascinating write, Tina. Entrances without exits leaves me thinking about the Eagles song, "Hotel California" where 'you can check out anytime, but you can never leave.' Born and raised in California, no matter where I journey or live it seems my spirit still resides within some Hotel California. |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thank you all so much for the nice comments. I really appreciate it. |
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