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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were slender trees doing things with the winds that seem preoccupied with knowing us both at the same time we were windows without blinds then with the rain we seemed to combine and stay stolen from the slighted sky we were quiet coves at ocean brow too eyes wide open in attention to attending to how we fit the sand into our pockets we were the dark wet stones of river times rounded were our sides, edgeless dancing wanting the currents to ruin our positions but contended with rain whispered love songs ______________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
*sigh* still as beautiful as ever Mr Daark.  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hey pretty lady...nice to see you back...thanks lady!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
we are empty wells waiting to be filled with verse and with weather, let the rain begin....... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inki...saturation infatuation? Thanks sexymiss |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
we were windows without blinds then with the rain we seemed to combine and stay stolen from the slighted sky ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You stir the heart, and mess up my hair with your changing weather forecasts.  This is my kind of raindance~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy..you always smile me babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
we were quiet coves at ocean brow too eyes wide open in attention to attending to how we fit the sand into our pockets we were the dark wet stones of river times rounded were our sides, edgeless dancing wanting the currents to ruin our positions I get lost in your words, inhaling the images... not wanting to reach the last lines. So very beautiful! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..I enjoy you stepping into the sand of my mind thanks lady |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
And this is the poem that whispers pictures and sounds to take me to sleep. I love how you write - but you know that already. G'nite, D. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks little one for the night read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This reads like a caress from the elements, all together. A dance that your awareness caught in the air somehow and transformed into poetic images to linger upon in delight. Love, Margherita |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Hello DS: "rain whispered love songs..." indeed. Hombre, you do have a way with words, and the earthy images. Nice road, today, Dark one. Peace Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
I clicked here thinking this was simply a poem. How glad I am to discover it's more than than that - it's an experience. And a lovely one at that. Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks so much special lady ___________ AH, thanks so much amigo ________________ ms morningstar, thank you for bringing your bubble by.. |
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