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SlowlyFallAway
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0 posted 2009-11-03 10:58 AM


You waste your time like table scraps
Throwing away what you can't get back
Placing re-orders but the prices never change
Choosing different entrees but the taste remains the same
Looking at the bill as if the price will go away
You slip a simple smile in hopes the one across will pay
Sitting, forcing small talk, as the daylight fades to gray
They lock the doors for closing up but you would rather stay
And so it goes you sit alone, and think not but to pray
Yet so much like those table scraps
Your life becomes a waste

November 3rd 2009
Emily Shives

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AncientHippie
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since 2009-10-15
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1 posted 2009-11-03 02:03 PM


Heavy piece of work, Emily.  Makes strong my resolve to eat at home!  Captures well a lonely individual in a mundane, and somewhat dreary, life and eatery.
Very sad.
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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