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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA 
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Sleepless Nights |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~sweet rose... i just take two tylenol p.m.'ers...lol beautiful poem, beautiful lady, on my favorite subject...the broken heart : ) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oklahoma Rose - close your eyes, and concentrate while I whisper a soft poem to you. It indeed will put you to sleep... BC |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
brneyedgrly: Thank you for reading and leaving such a nice comment. I could write a book about broken hearts. Lord knows I've had plenty. Bill: I would love to be put to sleep, while listening to you whisper your soft poems to me.I am sure they would cause me to have pleasant dreams. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you sing of your sorrow so sweetly almost makes the pain worth it but I guess not |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sleep is over rated. LOL. A poignant night tune, dear lady. May memories and dreams comfort you through those restless sleepless nights. Maybe it's time for a sizzling dream poem? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
my sweet Sue.. what a wonderful poem! It has a great flow to it.. and tells of yearning and love and so much more.. I love your new pic!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Inkedgoddess, thank you for you kind comment. Midnightsun, I don't get much sleep these days. A sizzling dream poem, huh? Roniece, Thank you for your very kind comment. I have sure missed you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whenever I have experienced nights like that, I hug a pillow and whisper sweet nothings into it.  I know, that's pathetic! lolSeriously speaking, Sweet Sue, I have known that kind of loneliness in the middle of the night. At those times, I conjure up the perfect man and spend a wonderful night dreaming about him! A good imagination is a wonderful thing!  Love 'n a hug, Linda  |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Thank you, Linda, for reading and commenting. Hmmmm! You know what? I can do that. And, sometimes I do. Even is it is only in my day dreams. Oh boy, can I day dream. If only those fantasies would come true. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Heck I just bought myself a teddy bear to hug, it's way less complicated.  Sleep is over-rated anyway, get up and enjoy it. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sue, there was laughter you say, then the loneliness is felt even more I am sure. You have rendered your feelings intensely here. A teddybear is less complicated I agree ....  Love, Margherita  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I think the worst time is when I have a bad dream and my heart is beating too fast. Felt this, lady Rose. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is one of your very best. You write with so much to share and so much behind your words. You were among the first that I would read regularly when I came to PiP. Alison |
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