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Open Poetry #45
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vandana
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0 posted 2010-01-01 11:17 AM



Break Away
That's life
You know
This is how heart beats
When someone let go of you
This is your heart
That mends
So let it break
Break away
Break the clouds away
Rain rolls by
Pieces of my broken heart
To the love
It is pouring down the rain
Tearing my heart apart
This is my life
To follow my heart
To the one I love
Take a look at my heart
Now My heart breaks
Into pieces....
Break away



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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794
1 posted 2010-01-01 12:43 PM

very nice, enjoyed much.
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2010-01-01 04:49 PM

Dear Vandana,

I hope that your heart will not be broken.

Love Bobby
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2010-01-01 08:25 PM

This aches, beautifully!!
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