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After Hour Dreams |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ You were my summer mystery. A heat wave drawing me in with your succulent sweet seduction sweltering. You were the blue moon rising setting the stage in overtones a rendezvous review after hour dreams. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, so gloriously romantic, dear Lori! A little gem! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy... after OUR dreams? enjoyed you here |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for being so gracious and for always taking the time to read me, Margherita. Ummm D~ What goes on after hours stays that way. Ours and hours goes both ways. Thanks for looking. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I have had hours run into hours but not quite like these, lol! : ) CT |
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Capricious Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 89California, USA |
"you were my summer mystery" Perfect beginning. So much said in so few words. Neat and sweet, enjoyed the read. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such a smile... well done dear lady. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for stopping by everyone. It does my heart good to read your nice replies. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your romantic poetry is excellent, Lori. Ida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely, tender write, Lori  M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
 Thanks M and Ida~ and to everyone who took the time. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bluesy - I bet you are so Bluesy and full of rythmn. Sensuous poem, liked it a lot... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Bluesy, this is so romantic, a very enjoyable read. yann |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yums. *G* This is delightful and delicious! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
made me sigh |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Hi Bluesy! It's great to read this sensuous poem! I could pass up a title like that without checking it out, and I'm glad I did! Awesome! misce' |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh Lori your alliteration sizzles.... "with your succulent sweet seduction sweltering." |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
May I, unconditionally, bump you? : ) CT |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Many thanks to all of you. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine and 'steamy' ! applause for this effective 'penning' ! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...left in hollows on the the beach as we went our separate ways. So strong the heart, so fleeting the heat, so lasting the memories. Much enjoyed... j. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I enjoy your alliteration. And more poems need the word "succulent" in them. lol |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
it is good to sit awhile and think back to the fondest memories like this, sweltering seduction sounds like you enjoyed it imensely as i did reading it, thank you for sharing it... Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for leaving your warm words in reply. Each one of you make me smile so bright!! Happy New year, one and all!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Happy New Year, Sweet Serenader!  "succulent sweet seduction sweltering." ~ sumptuous! (I'm a sucker for alliteration! :pigtails) Love 'n a big hug, Linda www.lindadowd.com |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good grief how did I miss this one? This reminded me of Mrs. Robinson. I can dream can't I?  Happy New Year Bluesy. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you ladies, you two are the kind of people who make this place so special. Big hugs, and best wishes for a Happy 2010!! |
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