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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-12-31 02:47 PM


    

mistress of tomorrow's smoking bay
bend my mind around your sea hems
and tempt me with the tall sigh sails
of your siren song fragility

dash my panting will into those minutes
against the soft sided bosom
of your coexistant eternity
and blush my leather in your lather

to tempt me with your tide swallows
as you feel my splintered dreams
with the tips of your fingers
let me prick your deepest viscosity

with our rapture of sand castle memories


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daark (photo/by daark)

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suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
1 posted 2009-12-31 06:43 PM


I don't think I could pick a favorite line or group of lines... I just know I welcome the read of every one. *S*

Beautiful work, D... Happy New Year!!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-12-31 06:49 PM


of your coexistant eternity
and blush my leather in your lather

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See see, there goes your sigh ways again!!

and cheers to the sandcastle memories too!!

*tease*

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
3 posted 2009-12-31 07:01 PM


Stranger, the title alone is worth the price of admission....the poem compliments it well.
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2010-01-01 06:45 AM


ms suthern,, thanks lady for the eyes...


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ms bluezy, did you say tease?  meet for coffee and teas?  thanks special lady..


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Balladeer...humble thanks amigo, I appreciate your reviews.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2010-01-09 04:48 PM


quote:
mistress of tomorrow's smoking bay
bend my mind around your sea hems
and tempt me with the tall sigh sails
of your siren song fragility

dash my panting will into those minutes
against the soft sided bosom
of your coexistant eternity
and blush my leather in your lather

to tempt me with your tide swallows
as you feel my splintered dreams
with the tips of your fingers
let me prick your deepest viscosity

with our rapture of sand castle memories




Totally amazing and fascinating in text and picture, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
6 posted 2011-10-02 03:32 PM


Very nice Mr. D
ms. e

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