Open Poetry #45 |
bending of yachtless bottles |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mistress of tomorrow's smoking bay bend my mind around your sea hems and tempt me with the tall sigh sails of your siren song fragility dash my panting will into those minutes against the soft sided bosom of your coexistant eternity and blush my leather in your lather to tempt me with your tide swallows as you feel my splintered dreams with the tips of your fingers let me prick your deepest viscosity with our rapture of sand castle memories _____________ daark (photo/by daark) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I don't think I could pick a favorite line or group of lines... I just know I welcome the read of every one. *S* Beautiful work, D... Happy New Year!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
of your coexistant eternity and blush my leather in your lather ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ See see, there goes your sigh ways again!! and cheers to the sandcastle memories too!! *tease* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Stranger, the title alone is worth the price of admission....the poem compliments it well. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern,, thanks lady for the eyes... ____________ ms bluezy, did you say tease? meet for coffee and teas? thanks special lady.. ___________________ Balladeer...humble thanks amigo, I appreciate your reviews. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Totally amazing and fascinating in text and picture, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Very nice Mr. D ms. e |
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