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Open Poetry #45

..whispers of sorrow..

ninjawild
Junior Member

since 2009-08-11

Posts 33
u.s. army

0 posted 2009-12-31 12:51 PM

the whispers of sorrow
are waiting faintly
the shadows escape
we spoke so sweetly
the lay of bed sheets
on shattered comfort
the skies breath fire
in empty faces
.......
.......
keen knowledge knows nothing
while widows waste waiting
children scream cheery
as all awaken
thrill trembling torture
as silent shivers softly spread
victory's vivacious vow
pleasant pressure pries
.......
.......
a thorn
guarding its pedals
as all defenses fail
the flower is still plucked from stem
is there point to the thorn at all
but the beauty of its anatomy
.......
.......
a riddle
playing game with its meaning
when the hiding is never found
where is the smile of accomplishment
.......
.......
glass edges sat upon
in dream like trance
yet the drops of somber nights
drip steadily in a distorted mind
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.......
struggles of dainty suggestions
into the wrong doings done right
deeply eerking into the being
trying to do best in all that it is
.......
.......
the peircing peak of emotion
of witness to the innocence
being broken of all truth
honesty to their way of life
.......
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the belittled blindly yern for understanding
the broken hearted cautiously guard for strength
the unsheltered hopelessly wait for the miracle
the lost are lost until the unlost look outside

these are the thoughts of me..

..wisdom comes from the better choices of stupidity..
..curiosity is above all the best teacher..

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

1 posted 2009-12-31 10:58 AM

"a riddle
playing game with its meaning
when the hiding is never found
where is the smile of accomplishment"

"these are the thoughts of me"

-and me as well-
but you it explained it better than I could.
nice.

ninjawild
Junior Member

since 2009-08-11

Posts 33
u.s. army

2 posted 2009-12-31 09:38 PM

thank you slowlyfallaway..

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