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Open Poetry #45

For a Little Star

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-12-29 11:58 AM

There in the nighttime sky
I behold a little lonely star
Where my thoughts of love reside
Held aloft and brighter by far
Ever the steady guiding light
For a traveler through the storm
How can something in the cold of night
Be so distant, yet ever so warm
No jewels upon Earth can measure
Nor even be held in any compare
For God so values this treasure
In Heaven she will forever shine there

Such a beautiful little star in the envious sky
I shield her radiance from my undeserving eyes

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

1 posted 2009-12-29 12:07 PM

clever little....

good write.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2009-12-29 09:24 PM

beautiful work!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2009-12-30 08:10 PM

The soft light never shined so bright.

Your heart is a gentle and loving one, guy!!

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

4 posted 2009-12-31 11:05 AM

You could be undeserving ... or you could be looking at the wrong star.

Nice write.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2010-01-01 12:35 PM

I've read this a few times. Your softer side shines bright. Happy New Year!

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