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Open Poetry #45

Finding Out About Jenny

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-12-23 06:03 PM

Finding Out About Jenny

Let me tell you about Jenny,
right now she's looking at you,
she likes to tell guys
that she likes them
but she'll break your heart
before she's through.
When she was younger
she was married,
this man was the
love of her life,
but he left her
for another lover and
Jenny wanted to end her life.
Now she relives those moments
each time she takes on a new man,
she treats him like a King
until he says he loves her
and then she kicks
him in the can.
Its been that way
it seems forever,
and if she has her way
it shall always be,
I learned from Jenny
the hard way,
the day I ask for
her hand in marriage
was the day she
broke up with me.

JamesLee
22December
2009

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

1 posted 2009-12-23 10:36 PM

Indeed, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned...or so the saying goes. I also sincerely hope this isn't experience talking!

Aenea

If I don't say it...who will?

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2009-12-24 06:58 AM

Thanks james for the enjoyable poem that makes think about . this is a painful story but we have to face that love isn't always an easy romance. God bless her.

merry christmas

yann

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-12-24 10:49 AM

I have to feel sorry for Jenny in this poem. She must hurt a lot. I like this, James.

Merry Christmas.

Alison

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-12-29 06:48 PM

Thank you Morning Star, 2islander2 and Alison for the wonderful responses...actually I wrote this thinking about a male friend of mine that lost his first love and seems to take it out on each new woman he meets...first wining and dining them and telling them he loves them and then breaking their hearts within 3 to 6 months...not sure why it came out with a woman as the subject...James

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