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Open Poetry #45

It's Just Not Right

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2009-12-18 06:15 PM

It’s Just Not Right

It’s not right
that it stays.
That it still
has its own
heartbeat.

It has become
parasitic and
it seams,
part of my life,
part of my mirror.

Is it me that looks back
or some
string pulled puppet,
some pain molded
construct of a man.

Has your residue
given life to
some offshoot
of who I should be,
some once removed
name sharing lie.

Your gone,

But I fix
The meals you fixed.
I wear the clothes
You bought.

I still dream your dreams.

It’s just not right.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2009-12-18 10:59 PM

"parasitic"
beautifully said Z

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

2 posted 2009-12-21 01:39 AM

Thank you Lady

Zeitgeist

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