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Reminder to self |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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You did not cry when monster storm Found you at home alone When fear gripped throat and robbed your breath You barely even moaned You did not cry when dark garage Was where you had to sleep Though you missed your cats mightily You didn't allow weep You did not cry when exhaustion Made every muscle scream You just kept climbing up those stairs With your boxed life and dreams You did not cry when a new friend Turned out to be unkind The loss was hard, but you always knew There were more friends to find And you won't cry because some thief Has robbed you in this season If you must be sniveling sap Save tears for better reason. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Ruth, I feel like straightening my back to align to your strength! I love how you talk to your self and praise it for former wise reactions and invite it even in this new deplorable challenging moment to react with detachment ... I am sorry for your sad experiences, but I sure do admire you for your wisdom and for the beauty of this poem in which you glow so brightly. Love, Margherita  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Margherita: Thank you so much for your wonderfully kind response. *S* I feel a bit of a fraud, though. *S* It really is a kick aimed at my own pants... and I needed one to quit wallowing, get over it and get on with it. LOL As I told the friend who suggested I post it, I'm not strong... I just keep faking it, hoping someday I'll make it. *S* It's been a tough day... thank you for making it brighter! *S* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I understand, dear Ruth, of course we can't remain indifferent when such bad events happen in our lives, it's not a sign of weakness, it's human to be sour for a while, but you have written a great piece to get yourself through ... and it will help also others to cope better!  I put the smilie in because the Christmas cap is so lovely ...M. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Ruth.I love your spirit. One day when you are not even prepared, something wonderful will happen. It can and does without even knowing it is in the works. Keep that smile on.It opens many doors. But the trick is to be ready when the door opens and act upon it. Been there. love you, jo |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
strong strong woman |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, friend, it's good to remind ourselves what we have made it through when times are tough this is a keeper! I LOVE it! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Ruth, There you go Hon. You have the right idea and a good approach. Love Bobby |
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QuietAstronomer Junior Member
since 2009-12-13
Posts 18North Carolina, USA |
A dandy write, to be sure. Thank you for the sharing. QA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
suthern - you do write some meaningful poetry... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my dear sweet Suthern One, my own heart leapt into my throat as I read of your ordeals! Ruth, I am so sorry to hear of what you have just gone through. To quote myself ~ "Earth Life Ain't Easy!" You're more of a trooper than you think! I'd have had more than a sniffle or two if I were you! Wrapping my arms around you, Love, Linda  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You did not cry when a new friend Turned out to be unkind The loss was hard, but you always knew There were more friends to find Dear Ruth, I feel for you dear friend but you do have the right attitude. I wish you good luck in finding many more good friends. I'm one for sure. Love and a big hug. Lindsay |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Margherita: You are the lovely one, dear lady... smilie or not. *S* Thank you so much! *S* late: I'm waiting... waiting... waiting. *G* Thank you, my friend... I appreciate you so much !*S* slick: supportive, supportive friends... and a sturdy wall to lean on. *S* PS: I'm so glad you like it... thank you! *S* Bobby: I try, my friend... I try. *S* Thank you!!! *S* QA: Thank you for reading... Your kind comments are greatly appreciated! *S* Bill: Thank you very much! *S* EA: To be wrapped in such wings makes it all worthwhile. *S* Thank you, sweet lady... so very much! *S* Lindsay: You are indeed a friend... and one I treasure. *S* Thank you so much! *S* |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Ruth, I seldom feel a need to argue with you, but I must insist on this point. You are EXTREMELY strong. Crying and talking about it to people who care is a way of healing and you know that instinctively. We all have an obligation to heal ourselves in order to heal others, as you do so admirably. As regards "faking it", I am sure you know the song from My Fair Lady that expresses the sentiments (I am not sure I have the words exactly right) "Whenever I feel afraid, I whistle a happy tune and the happiness in my tune convinces me that I am not afraid". You know that instinctively too. I was with you through every stanza of your poem, and felt for you as I have done in the real life instances that I knew of at the time. Thank you for sharing the quiver-sensitive and beautiful poem with us. Please pray for my darling Daisy-dog (details on Discussions). I know you will. Owl |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
One warm hug headed your way... You are doing ok... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lord knows you have been tested in the last long while, but I know that you know, we are never given more than we can handle. You will see a brighter day, and soon, and know we all are with you and care Ruth. p.s. a lot of re-runs! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I so hope that things improve for you, Ruth. I know how it feels to be tested and sometimes it is very hard to be strong. Sending you a warm Christmas hug. Ida |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Hi suthern, It's okay to cry. You've been a pillar of strength and kindness to me since we've met on the blue pages. I think you are one terrific lady who inspires many! Good luck to you, my friend, and keep your chin up. Keep writing. "I erase when I write and I write to erase". That's my motto. This is excellent and a keeeper! Be well, my friend. ~misce |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Owl: Sweet lady, you now have me whistling through a smile. *S* Thank you so much!! Magnus: That hug is greatly appreciated, my friend...thank you! *S* Mysteria: But Christmas specials are my favorite shows... regardless of how many times I've seen them. LOL However, the DISH people have been great... so I'm able to watch TV again. *S* Thank you! Ida: I'm good now. *S* I don't feel quite as safe as I did before... but I guess being extra aware is a good thing. *S* Thank you so much! *S* misce: You dear... you do know how to fill my heart. *S* And I thank you... so very much!!! |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Ruthy, Make sure you keep your hopes high and your satelite dish higher. I am glad you posted this wonderful poem. It is an inspirational piece for sure. Happy holidays Tracey |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Tracey: Thank you so much, dear friend... I'm trying to keep both my hopes and my satellite dish high and safe from harm. *S* And if I see a ladder against my balcony, I'll push first and ask questions later. LOL Your encouragement means the world to me... thank you! *S* |
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