Open Poetry #45 |
The spanner and the "you" |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Creation is making its way in the world slowly and surely one step at a time and there is a plan, a grandiose plan, for the next perceived lifetime. But there are spanners, you know, in the workshop of soul that through intent get into the wheels and grind to a stop the meant to be after the most incredible noise. There will be noise from the crowd like group consciousness gone mad for the spanner refuses to move from her standpoint stuck like glue to her mistrust of you. There’s always a “you” to snarl up the works but the group blames that harmless spanner because they cannot see spanners are steel and can’t by themselves get there from here. So maybe there is a king of spanners who lays down the rules unmindfully for all little spanners to be like sheep herded by border collies ~ but always in every endeavour you’ll find one rebel spanner. That spanner is steel; don’t forget, don’t forget, it’s possessed of severe mistrust that will forever preclude movement from the there to the here. Spanners have hearts sensitive, sweet, but hurts of the past have made them like dough and they will not rise no matter the bribe into another perceived lifetime. Forget it! That spanner is in the wheels to not ever again love and then loose the “you” who snarled up the works! Helen / 14 December 2009 [This message has been edited by Honeybunch (12-14-2009 05:18 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Honey, how do you keep coming up with such intriguing concepts? That is one creative mind of yours! Love and a hug, Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Honeybunch - you are very creative, it shows in this writing... BC |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks Linda and Charles. Perhaps I just relate to the small seemingly insignificant things in life like love - or maybe I just need a spanner but then again, if I had one, I wouldn't know what to do with it being as I am extremely challenged when it comes to the "fix-it" stuff. I therefore just choose to think that nothing will break. Love Helen |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You have certainly written a thought provoker with this one dear Helen, It will give us all something to think about. Love. Lindsay |
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