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Open Poetry #45

This Oneness

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2009-12-13 04:18 AM

This Oneness

with only breath
and a will to be,
i touched

tentatively
wisps of karma
greet and dance

familiar and demure
they listen
and connect

shared need
fills void
love laughs

this vibe
this world
this oneness

spins us

Zeitgeist.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2009-12-13 05:27 PM

powerful work Z

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

2 posted 2009-12-13 07:57 PM

Thank you Lady. I always appreaciate your replies.

Z.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2009-12-14 02:20 AM

Short lines
are neat
and easy
to read.

this piece
was real good.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

4 posted 2009-12-14 07:46 PM

Thank
you
viking
for
your
reply

Zeitgeist

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2009-12-15 06:16 AM

Very captivating!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2009-12-15 04:16 PM

Welcome To Pip!

ARCTIC WIND

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

7 posted 2009-12-18 05:24 PM

Thank you Margherita and Artic for your replies and your welcome. Its good to be here.

Zeitgeist

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