Open Poetry #45 |
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Weather Report |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
In my springtime I loved when it was new and the weather report promised laughter in the afternoon Again in the summer when it was warm and I basked in it’s sun in reflective delight I loved in my autumn wrapped in it’s multi coloured coat ignoring the weatherman’s prediction that the wind would change Now in my winter when the newness and warmth are needed most it’s a foul wind that blows and I feel a chill in looking back knowing that I will follow my sorrow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Life can feel like that at times~~ ![]() M |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Thank you for the fine poem prophet. Spring will find you again. Z. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
It is a fine poem, tp! It reminded me of this - "The weatherman With decorous aplomb he delivers the news to a nation unmoved by repetitive tales. His forecast of cold; one degree up, minus a few, how shrewd, how astute, how insightful perhaps, like a prophet divines to the emotionally wise. Time’s brought it again, this winter I’ve known, but the cold passes by like birds in full flight to herald in spring and the seeding again of new life from old and from the dark, light. How artful the plan, how devious, bad, to bring in the cold to the warmth of my home but I move to the right, blank out the screen, and the weatherman fades back into his cage. He’ll stay there, I guess, for a decade or two, but I picture him there so suave, debonair, and cool, oh, so cool dressed casual, no tie, in winter’s spotlight that highlights a lie. ‘Tis summer, my friends, the summer of life, and I’ve promised myself no shivers tonight!' Just remember that it's only winter if we think it is - ![]() Helen |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
great poem but oh so sad... |
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