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Open Poetry #45

One Cold Winter Night

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2009-12-11 11:47 AM

I open the front door
and stand out in the cold,
no shoes, short sleeve shirt
with long pajama pants.
The sky was covered
in clouds and starlight,
moon hide between clouds
and snow. The air was
cold, layered in sweet scents.
Midnight had already passed,
only I was awake in this
close-knit world.
I stayed out, baring the
cold, not understandng
my reasons. But was
waiting for the
wind, the brush of snow,
a voice, someone
to tell me to come in
and shut the door.
It's too cold for you to bare,
and it's too late to be out
now.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2009-12-11 11:56 AM

that's sad a little

very touching

hope you hear that voice soon

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

2 posted 2009-12-11 01:45 PM

Passing Shadows- thank you for your comment.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2009-12-11 04:57 PM

I like very much, you write with magnificent simplicity to my opinion, the story is philosophical and very interesting...A very enjoyable read.

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-12-11 07:23 PM

A moment of great solitude, yet also of oneness with the surrounding nature. We are never ever totally alone.

Beautifully written.

Best wishes, may love keep you warm.

Love,
Margherita

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