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Open Poetry #45

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-12-10 05:57 PM

Super Tight

When I pick her
up at the airport
it will be all
hugs & kisses,
she know who
her heart touches
and she knows
who she misses.
I couldn't ask
for a better way
to spend a Monday night
then to melt into
the arms of my baby,
hugging & kissing her
& holding her super tight.

JamesLee
07December
2009

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2009-12-10 07:39 PM

Sounds to me that you have it laid out just
about right...thanx James

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-12-11 12:30 PM

James,

The wise poet avoids the use of ampersands in written work.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2009-12-11 07:02 AM

Hello James this is so lovely and romantic, we need romance and poetry.

regards

yann

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2009-12-11 11:42 AM

Monday nights around here are for football, not lovin' LOL

oh well, guess the honeymoon's over

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2009-12-11 10:40 PM

James, you are so romantic!

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