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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-12-09 12:29 PM

Morning will come, that much is proven true
Though the night is endless when all alone
For time itself never shall misconstrue
That which Heaven can no longer condone
If it falls amongst love and mortal men
A happier place this would surely be
Of love immortal and love without end
And my love becoming a boundless sea

These things speak of what may come to pass
Yet existed beside me all the while
For in your arms, a Heaven that will last
And a reason to be, within your smile
Fully my heart will be on such display
Now I know that Heaven is on the way

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-12-10 05:14 AM

It's your love that brings heaven to you. This is so gentle and beautifully written.

Love,
Margherita

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-12-10 08:19 AM

Glad you enjoyed, M.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-12-15 12:06 PM

For in your arms, a Heaven that will last
And a reason to be, within your smile
Fully my heart will be on such display
Now I know that Heaven is on the way

How very beautiful! *S* I love the anticipation of heaven on the way... great write! *S*

kindredspirit
Member

since 2009-05-19

Posts 156

4 posted 2009-12-17 06:29 AM

"Morning will come, that much is proven true
Though the night is endless when all alone
For time itself never shall misconstrue
That which Heaven can no longer condone"

This is absolutely wonderful! and I love your rhyming!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2009-12-17 04:21 PM

"Heaven" in the title caught me eye right off the bat! lol

"Now I know that Heaven is on the way"

Yeppers! There truly can be heaven on earth!

Linda

www.lindadowd.com

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2009-12-17 10:21 PM

Of love immortal and love without end
And my love becoming a boundless sea

~*~

Traveling the sea is a favorite pastime of mine, one not often met, but still a viable dream...

Love is like a dream...sometimes we meet it; sometimes we just dream it.

Well done, Sir.

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