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Open Poetry #45

Be Lucrative or Be Dead

Veni Mortem
Junior Member

since 2008-07-31

Posts 43

0 posted 2009-12-09 01:51 AM

The pestilence of precedence
Infecting the innocence
Of natural deliverance
From mother to grave

Enslaved by the dead
And shackled to grief
You try to survive
Allowed no relief

You polish your chains
Paint over the stone
But nothing can hide
That you are alone

Left in a dungeon of elegant pain
Fragile enigmas in accumulations
Nailed to the cross you were forced to construct
Lost in seclusion forever

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-12-09 08:18 AM

A very impressive write and I do detect some familiarity ...
It's not easy to keep the pace always.

Love,
Margherita

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