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Memories of a Moonchild... pt1
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Memories of a Moonchild... pt1 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Pressed Between Thoughts I lay between the pages of your thoughts. Eyes traveling, line by line searching your world for a hint of me. Slipping from one page to the next I breathe with your words, feeling alive again. Inked in memory that first kiss, taken by surprise. So light, so tender, raising an awareness of the attraction to each. But that second one, ahhh that deep kiss, that pulled from all the senses and fed the hunger craved... I felt the burn, once again, the intense fire, as your thoughts curl around me. Pages comforting me, heating, nourishing my need for you. Pressed between your thoughts, of all you have held back, I begin to scribble in my own diary of this unspoken exchange, giving me new purpose for a tomorrow. M/M (7*2k) "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Maureen, I love your memories and the glimpse into your romantic heart!! And I am happy to see that this is just part one ... Absolutely wonderful! Love, Margherita  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - now if someone where to write me a poem like this I would be forever yours. A passionate write from a passionate pen... BC |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very nice to read of these tender memories, thank you for sharing.. Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... sending this next to the second part ... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
as your thoughts curl around me. Pages comforting me, heating, nourishing my need for you. I love the poem... but especially these lines!! |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Bursting at the seams with passion. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this was written so long ago...and I wonder if I still have that passion in me  Thank you all~~M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your touch is still there...no bout a doubt it.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Barry  M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I recall the murmurs and whims of a moonchild, they never cease .... though strangely dim now and then. Enjoyed! CT |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
M, IWIHWT (I wish I had written that! ~ For more reasons than one!  Every thought ~ every line ~ was a gem!  Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Ah, the deep and true feelings of a Moonchild. Poetry just doesn't get any better. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Ah, the deep and true feelings of a Moonchild. Poetry just doesn't get any better. Ida |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This is beautiful and honest. love it. latearrival |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
JamesM, thank you for the visit. Craig, well I once was mmoonchild on here and elsewhere since I prefer that to being a "Cancer" Linda, You can make one smile with your lovely responses. and thanks.Ida, Thank you so much for stopping by. I appreciate it. latearrival, I always write honest..sometimes too much so Thank you.M |
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