Open Poetry #45 |
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Two Old Souls |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Two Old Souls I saw two old souls Sitting on a porch swing together And I wondered as I watched What they were like when they were young. Did they know the passions of youth, The heart-pounding terrible longings? Did they know the pain of an unfaithful lover, Or the joy of love returned? Are they dreaming of days When skin was firm and unwrinkled And eyes were bright and undimmed? Do they still see each other In their glorious youth, Laughing, planning, hoping? To have shared life's road together As they now share the swing ~ What patience must have grown there, What sharing of burdens, What loving care must have been given. Lord, grant me that on my road of life There might be someone at the end, With whom I may look back At all the sharing and loving we've known, So that someone might see us There on the porch swing And wonder. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it, Nancy~~ and I wonder the opposite sometimes as I swing... Welcome M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry! This is a wonderful start to a shining future for you both in reading and writing. Thank you for sharing. Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome, dear Nancy, to PIP! A sensitive first entry, beautiful ponderings. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi , Nancy, it was great to read you, your poem is deep and beautiful, well expresssed, a very enjoyable read. yann |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Nancy, Welcome to PiP. I really enjoyed this poem and look forwarding to reading your other poems that you have posted (I want to enjoy them later today when I am fully awake!). It's nice to have you among us. Alison |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Wow, this is wonderful. I always thought about that with my grandparent's, they been together for 50 years. Also WELCOME TO PIP POETRY FORUM!! ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nancy - thoughtful words for two old souls. Enjoyed reading this... BC |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy, certainly a joy to read. I hope so too...I think I am there! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
so this is your first post! oh Nancy, it's magnificent! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
What loving care must have been given. Lord, grant me that on my road of life There might be someone at the end, With whom I may look back At all the sharing and loving we've known, Dear Nancy, welcome to PIP and if this is a sample of your poetry then I'm sure that we can look forward to some wonderful poems. A delight to read. Lindsay |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
Awesome. Definetley something I always wonder about as well. |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Thank you Slowlyfallaway and LindseyP, for your kind words about Two Old Souls. I'm afraid not all my poetry will measure up to your comments on this one, but thank you just the same. Here's the story on this poem: I was inspired to write Two Old Souls when I was leaving my parents' home for the airport after a visit with them. They just looked so beautiful on that swing, with a sunbeam just touching them, that with my heart filled with emotion, I wrote this poem in my mind all the way home on the plane. My Dad passed away in 1987 and my Mom in 1995, but I have never forgotten that moment in time. So whenever I read Two Old Souls I see them there, together, in my mind's eye. Thanks again for your kind words. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have the powers of observation and a compassionate, loving heart that enables you to write truly touching poetry such as this. May your dreams become your reality. ![]() Love & Light, Earth Angel ![]() |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Thank you Earth Angel for your kind comment on Two Old Souls. I thank the powers that be everyday for any small ability I may have to move others. |
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