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life less frightening
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life less frightening |
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Zainab Junior Member
since 2009-11-01
Posts 18Iraq |
Life less frightening I keep picturing life where you are near Where I won’t have to cry a single tear And even if I did it won’t be so bad Cause I got your shoulder to cry on And I got your helping hands A life with less pain and a much less fear If only I had you near But day dreams are not enough Won’t push me up Won’t make me tough They only promise me a life less frightening A life with you is much delighting Less lonely nights .. much easy days If I was waking up to your pretty face ! |
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Soul snatcher Junior Member
since 2009-11-24
Posts 29 |
In the arms of the one you love.....like coming home Quote: ------------------------------------------- They only promise me a life less frightening A life with you is much delighting Less lonely nights .. much easy days If I was waking up to your pretty face ! ------------------------------------------- These lines sum it all up..... Beautifully written........ Ss |
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Zainab Junior Member
since 2009-11-01
Posts 18Iraq |
thanks soul natcher for reading and commenting I appreciate it . |
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romantico Junior Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 16NYC |
Less lonely nights .. much easy days If I was waking up to your pretty face ! Love this!!! Great Write!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You're right... daydreams aren't enough... but they sure beat empty! *S* Great write! |
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Zainab Junior Member
since 2009-11-01
Posts 18Iraq |
Romantico , suthern thanks for your replies I'm flattered by your opinions and I appreciate it . |
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