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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2009-12-01 03:44 AM

Deeper Than Darkness

Sleep eludes the dominance of mind and matter
Clean slate of dawn, clear song the latter
By sight and sound moves right and round
To sense the velvet caves of precious time

Intent, this space to rent seems comfortless
Though thinking through, seems to renew with elegance
A mind at rest, conceives conquest of imagery
Abide endures concentric blurs and purity

Led here adrift, my heart does sift the fragrant past
Where hand in hand, my heart does land and ever last
Such left to know, and even so, emotions phrase
From deeper down, a place renown of higher grace

I am not ready to mouth the words
Emotion steady, succinct it stirs

Perhaps the last sip of sanity has claimed me mute
Though dawn of day forebear thoughts resolute
Silent as the snow, the night has grown so cold
Yet sun strikes chip at darkness’ stunning hold

There stretch and yawn by noon, appreciation’s tune
My love for you by far deeper than darkness

Copyright Kkh 11/30/09

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-12-01 07:29 PM

quote:
Perhaps the last sip of sanity has claimed me mute
Though dawn of day forebear thoughts resolute
Silent as the snow, the night has grown so cold
Yet sun strikes chip at darkness’ stunning hold

There stretch and yawn by noon, appreciation’s tune
My love for you by far deeper than darkness

Sigh, this is awesome.

Love,
Margherita

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-12-02 08:55 AM

You are always a treasure to read TD.

This poem is full of beauty and feeling.

romantico
Junior Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 16
NYC

3 posted 2009-12-02 04:23 PM

Led here adrift, my heart does sift the fragrant past Where hand in hand, my heart does land and ever last Such left to know, and even so, emotions phrase From deeper down, a place renown of higher grace

Nicely done here!!!

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2009-12-02 04:50 PM

This is indeed beautiful.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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