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Soul snatcher
Junior Member

since 2009-11-24

Posts 29

0 posted 2009-11-30 10:12 AM

When we unite

Will I see the love in your eyes
When I catch them in my gaze
Will I feel your body tremble
When enwrapped in my embrace
Will I hear you whisper softly
‘I love you’ in my ear
Will your scent fill my nostrils
The moment we draw near
Will I taste your sweet love
When my lips yours do meet
Will you all my senses satisfy
And sweep me off my feet

Do you know my favorite color
Which shirt I like to sport
How to give a back massage
If my muscles were all taut
Say the words I want to hear
When I’m feeling down
Can you cook my favorite dishes
With its aroma cure my frown
My most savory delights
Spread out for me to feed
Read me like an open book
And know my every need

Will I watch in wide eyed wonder
You undress one piece at a time
To reveal your beautiful body
Put me on a one track mind
Will my finger tips excite you
Send shockwaves all throughout
When I kiss you and caress you
Will it make you want to shout
As my tongue traces and tastes you
From your head down to your feet
When our bodies unite and we make love
Will it make us feel complete

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-11-30 10:19 AM

I hope that you both take time to learn so those questions will all be answered with "yes!". I like this a lot.

Alison

Soul snatcher
Junior Member

since 2009-11-24

Posts 29

2 posted 2009-11-30 01:55 PM

Hi Alison

'Yes'...that's what we both hope for...

I'm really glad you liked it....

Have a good day
Ss

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2009-12-01 02:01 AM

it takes a lifetime to find out

enjoyed

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2009-12-01 10:11 PM

Mmmmm hmmmm! Love the undercurrent and innuendos.

Very very cool poem, kinda hot in places too.

romantico
Junior Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 16
NYC

5 posted 2009-12-02 07:46 AM

Well done!

Kevin Brian Wright
http://www.myspace.com/kevinbwright

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

6 posted 2009-12-02 11:29 AM

Wonderful poem. Hope you and your love happiness

Soul snatcher
Junior Member

since 2009-11-24

Posts 29

7 posted 2009-12-02 12:08 PM

SEA , Kevin , Ken......thank you for your lovely comments.....glad you enjoyed it...

Blues.....the pleasure was all mine.....

Thank you

Ss

Danielle David
New Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 1

8 posted 2009-12-07 10:01 PM

You certainly write from the heart. Enjoyed your style.

P.S. You do have a gift. Nurture it

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2009-12-08 12:06 PM

quote:
Will I see the love in your eyes
When I catch them in my gaze
Will I feel your body tremble
When enwrapped in my embrace
Will I hear you whisper softly
‘I love you’ in my ear

Very lovely words of anticipation ... and it works the other way around too:

Will you see the love in my eyes
When you catch them in your gaze
Will you feel my body tremble
When enwrapped in your embrace
Will you hear me whisper softly
‘I love you’ in your ear

May the sweet harmony unfold!

Love,
Margherita

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