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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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even in gloves I can imagine the texture of you as a pale marble sunburn but you would call it blushing innocent you talk in your sleep sometimes, wordbacks seem to be revealed like left over love that has spilled from the skillet onto burners I wonder if he listens to your lip edges then or if he just keeps them raveled as twine and tells the mirror man he is the rope of you and that my windows don't really worship you when you are on purpose in nothing on just waiting for the hours to move you closer to when you don't need him as a part time god ______________ daark (forbidden) |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Wicked. I like this one a lot. Especially the twine/rope bit. Intelligent. Always intelligent. Dang. P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY interesting 'write' (and title)! ... [most excellent imagery] sustained applause for this 'penning' ! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
vm...mumbled thanks amigo ___________ 2ndhandy..thank you so much |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Masterful imagery and psychological depth, dear D.! An exceptionally intriguing piece. Love, Margherita |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
and that my windows don't really worship you when you are on purpose in nothing on ~love this : ) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend _____________ ms browneyes, thanks ms |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you talk in your sleep sometimes, wordbacks seem to be revealed like left over love that has spilled from the skillet onto burners The images your words create and the emotions they invoke would make your work memorable even if they didn't tweak memories... but of course... they do. *S* Wonderful!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suthern, you make me want to view the memory videos, grin. Thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D It's that time of year when the windows get a bit clouded with misty frost. But, I'll keep a chamois by the panes if you promise to look. A |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san and I will whisper to the glass to keep it moist..thanks babe ___________ ms van, thank you |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I enjoyed this one! ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks aw... |
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