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Living Breathing |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa 
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Now that you've made up you mind I guess I'll be expected to comply Like a good little girl Lay aside my wants and needs Blindly follow you Accepting and docile Just grin and bear it Soldier up for another go But I know that I can't I won't Because I'm no soldier and this is not army of mine What I am is a heart A living breathing chance For love For happiness For hope But you've made up your mind Effectively burned those bridges Set this course Manhandled and messed about And for what Greener grass in another yard so What I am is a missed opportunity your living breathing regret If I don't say it...who will? |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
You totally are and you totally rock. I loik dis'un. Paulus Maximoose I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"What I am is a missed opportunity your living breathing regret" excellent work! |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Wow! I love this. Sounds like something I would feel, even if I didn't know how to say it. Bless you! |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Wow, thank you everybody for reading and taking time out to post! Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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