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MadMarcus
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since 2009-11-25
Posts 25
Sweden, Solna

0 posted 2009-11-25 04:53 PM



Love is like a shoe,

Without the shoe, the foot gets cold,

The same goes for the heart,

Without love, the heart gets cold.

So wanna be my shoe?


I´ll bear this pain untill the day i day, then my heart will stop, the pain will go away, but my love will never disapear.

© Copyright 2009 Marcus Alexander Ditz - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2009-11-25 06:22 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James
MadMarcus
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since 2009-11-25
Posts 25
Sweden, Solna
2 posted 2009-11-25 07:21 PM


Thanks mate ^^ This one was made becuse i wanted to make a more fun simile to love.
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