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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2009-11-24 02:44 AM


If I could I would hop on a plane
and fly above the land
of the now betwixt and between
all knowing and sheer ignorance.

The pendulum swings, scales are unbalanced,
and nobody leans the same way
on hallowed ground that’s typecast
as a place meant for defilement.

There’s an army of ants that march faithfully
and unconsciously down the middle
like ogres armed and empowered
to make of the knowing an enemy.

And so there’s an underground movement
setting bombs and committing arson
to break up the enemy camp
and scatter and spread the knowing
like ash to be blown away.

The knowing when valued tips the scales
and when ignorance grows it blooms
and so for the masses stuck in between
there’s no where to hide but inside
the safety measure of life
where ants shape shift according to
plain and simple convenience.

But how convenient to have the sky
filled with ash of the knowing?
It’s not, you see, for ash believes
every scrap of its once former self
will meld and o’er lay the start, middle, end,
and everybody’s life.

Don’t hold your breath!  Time decides
or maybe those androids in sky
who fight from a better standpoint
than all of the ants on the ground!  

Helen / 24 November 2009


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-11-24 10:36 AM


Your intellect mixed with your poetic skills really make for an intelligent read.

If the first priority remains to assure food and health to all of humanity, the second is to allow knowledge to be acquired, so that every human learns to discern and doesn't follow blindly and in ignorance the main stream that points to the abyss ...

Thank you for this, dear Helen.

Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2009-11-24 10:48 AM


Dear Margherita - Thank you and, yes, the mainstream does point to the abyss and its followers will fall.  The scary part is that it may not be during the course of their present lifetimes and I, for one, don't want to face that abyss afterwards.  On the other hand, one can't believe in love and think that there's an abyss there but, of course, there is one for those who don't believe - I think.


Helen

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