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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2009-11-22 09:35 AM



So Much

it is so hard
to compete with the wind
the movements of
I don’t know where you go
the none of my business secrets
of where you have been
brushing by
the whisperings
of a touch
when the lingering
is what I needed
so much

"I'm so hard to handle
I'm selfish and I'm sad."
— Joni Mitchell



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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2009-11-22 09:57 AM


1slick_lady - pretty sad write...

BC

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2009-11-22 10:50 AM


I went through this once...

Never again!


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3 posted 2009-11-22 11:22 AM


We all have been through these moments. You
write them so accurately.

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4 posted 2009-11-22 03:45 PM


Hey, you are always welcome to visit B.C.
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5 posted 2009-11-23 05:48 PM


Sad... but I like the way you tell it like it is.
                             Ida

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6 posted 2009-11-24 01:44 AM


Helen,

This is very poignant.  Well done.  I am always glad that I stop to read your poetry.

Happy Thanksgiving.

Alison

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