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Betrayal |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Betrayal your words make you a liar and they don’t match the life you live others suffer from your own lacking did it creep in when you were a child teaching you the process of torture chasing things you could never touch unfair of the left out and all alone you spread sadness thickly with the knife cutting pieces trivializing the hurt pointing the other way on purpose you define the definition of perfection leaving out the forgiveness or tolerance one day my tears will dry and you will be just a chapter over "I'm so hard to handle |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is drenched with pain. And it comes across so powerfully. You write so well! Love, Margherita |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I lost the #  Know what Helen? What goes around comes around, and trust me it does! You will be all the stronger, and wiser, and never take this kind of betrayal again. Listen to the words, Joni was in the same place, exactly the same. She was all the better for having gone through that time in her life. Both Sides Now  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is one powerful write. I have been there, that's for sure and am kind of going through that now with a sister. It's hell. A |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yea just another chapter, not worth reading over. I love your choice of words and how you tie them all together to express yourself. Good good!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey you. Your pain made me come out of "retirement."  I love you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And Sharon is one up on me--as always. I didn't have a number to lose, but I did lose your e mail addy and it's not available to me now either. *frown* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
one day my tears will dry and you will be just a chapter over May that day come soon, dear lady!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"one day my tears will dry and you will be just a chapter over" seems to be everyone's favorite line... very powerful Helen. |
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