Open Poetry #45 |
In silence we walk |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* * * In silence we walk, fingers entwined. Feet immerse deep in puddles of memories. Single drops splash onto our skin. Awareness fills us to the brim. Sunrays sit on our shoulders to eavesdrop on our souls’ talk. We bask in the warmth of immeasurable love. In silence we walk ... * * * |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lovely thoughts, that you articulate with precision and artful brush. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, This touches me deeply. It partners perfectly with where I am at mentally right now. Pooetry is a gift that taps into our thoughts and emotions. Thank you for this - Love, Alison |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
I really like this. Makes mw want to go and snuggle with my Hon. ooxx Marti ________________________ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Margherita. Silence can say so much to those who can hear but even those who can most times don't even know that they are hearing. Beautiful picture! Love Helen |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
*sigh*... so very beautiful!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
May I say: I loved your poem, but the picture didn't work. I wanted it to be me and her, but I'm nowhere near him and she isn't quite her. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Margherita, what a lovely romantic poem you have written here dear friend that's enhanced by your beautiful picture. top marks for this one. Love. Lindsay |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
My dear Margherita wonderful pic is very romantic thank you we hope more My respect Nourzihane |
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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
two people totally in sinc with one another appreciating each others company no need for words the universe quietly enjoying the moment |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nice, love the thought....Now, if only I could find the water......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
dear Margherita, in silence we walk but this silence means more than fast or empty words, I love your poem, its warm intimacy and its charm. Makes me think of the liverpool's soccer motto: YOU NEVER WALK ALONE, outstanding song. bravo yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all from my heart! Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely presentation and words M |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You do romantic poetry better than anyone I know, Margharita. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear Dolphina, this poem is serenely lovely. I find that communing in silence with a loved one, can bring incedible feelings of closeness.I'm also a hand-holder! It is almost like holding hearts. I adored the feelings that your poems has evoked in me. You are love personified, my dear friend. Linda |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very beautiful poem. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Beautiful thoughts with a gorgeous photo. |
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