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Come and Go Memories...inspired
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Come and Go Memories...inspired |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Come and Go Memories As the weather chills and the nights become long, I linger awhile in the illusion of two. Unspoken feelings, mind traveling thoughts, the knowing of lips, tender traces of you. Feathered pillows that soften the restless of dreams when dark leaves behind the silence of doubt. Embracing the memories, the warmth of the hold once awakening to arms that would soothe and reach out. Awaiting the snowfall to heat up the fire Come and go memories are filled with desire. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Another awesome write from you, dear Maureen. You are beautifully inspired. Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An autumn evening such as this, where I could hear the crackle of the fire, and sense the quiet first fallen snow. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'autumnal memory' impressionism! applause!! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
quote: What a perfect ending for a beautiful poem. I love this one, Maureen. Alison |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
As the weather chills and the nights become long, I linger awhile in the illusion of two. Unspoken feelings, mind traveling thoughts, the knowing of lips, tender traces of you. Dear Maureen that is a beautiful post, romantic and tender and thorough delight to read. love and a big hug. Lindsay |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
The saddest word in this poem is: Illusion. Touching, very touching. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, everyone~~ Once again BC threw me some phrases to use to inspire me to write something new~~ So my thanks also go to him.  M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - there's a lot inside that gentle person, it shows in your writing... BC |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
love the passion. latearrival |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love your title and where your words took me too. It's beautiful Maureen~ |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is sad, but beautiful Maureen! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful poem... and a perfect ending! *S* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - had to read this again, and say that I like it as much as I did when I read it for the first time. It's amazing how you take the words and intertwine them into a poem... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you got inspired! You should publish a book. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Loved this! Awaiting the snowfall to heat up the fire Come and go memories are filled with desire. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bill, twice again I need to thank you for the inspiration. You always come up with such wonderful phrases. ...Now where is yours?  latearrival, Thank you for stopping by. Lori, Thank you, I really owe it to Bill, since my mind is not taking me to romantic places recently. Sue, It's not meant to be sad, just recalling times in the past. Ruth, Thank you, and my thanks again to Bill who occassionally sends me some phrases. Nice to see you back, Dixie. I wouldn't know where to start with a book. Sharon, well we got the snow again last night but the rain following it will douse the fires~~ Hope you have a wonderful holiday season. M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
nakdthoughts It's great to read your writing once again! You're sooo good! I thought this was really an interesting twist on words, "waiting for the snowfall to heat up the fire." Things are busy and breaking in principal #11... Not a super year, but the kids are pretty good for the most part. Help you're doing well and having a good year, as well. ~~~ misce |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
loved it "I linger awhile in the illusion of two." |
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