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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I often see the woman in your eyes even when the girl of you just glances and tempts my windows with burly girl hair and that curve of la gata's sensuality sometimes you seem taller then before when the man of my arms imagines us dancing and you are wearing only some comfortable with your eyes closed and safely undone you are distantly lady like but close enough for my mind to touch your smile side brim and for an instant I stir day dreams into my cup and wonder if you could taste those sounds perhaps you would turn over that single whisper and look at where it was made and when then smile at the man of me as you place it there on top of the many others in your collection contented momentarily in your sigh book encyclopedia ___________ daark (la gata) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and for an instant I stir day dreams into my cup and wonder if you could taste those sounds" I loved this part best, but all of it is wonderful  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suesea. Thanks babe |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You write lines that are simply genius, and only one with a profound understanding can write them as you do. Enjoyed. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Thought kitties enjoyed tail chasing..sorry, off my lips and in yer lap before my filter had time to catch it. *G* Everyone should have a DaarkDictionary on their nightstand. Love your language. H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms k...thank you lady friend.. ____________ ms ubp...I love whatever slips off of your lips...and, well you know, thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This makes me sigh. A |
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malikai New Member
since 2009-04-23
Posts 4 |
Amazing imagery. Very fluid structure that easily pulls me in to each line. PoetBook.com | A social poets network |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
At the word encyclopedia I think you should rightfully occupy a privileged space in any of those lists of outstanding poets... Meanwhile you stir profound sighs with these delightful "pages of la gata". There is more than unique poetic skills to your work, there is profound sensitivity and knowledge of the feminine universe and in general the universe of love. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you little one _________ malikai freind thank you and welcome to the blue zoo __________ ms mar, thank you lady friend...you smile me again |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
inspired once more, the liquid of her, they say is in the stirring. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Wordmistress indi, it is the velvet side of leather that you leave fingerprints on. Thanks friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Thank you for allowing us to sip at your day dreams cup ... You are so inspiring. Once is never enough! So I will bring this back to the top for further enjoyment. Love, Margherita  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved the reference to sigh book encyclopedia. Good one!  Happy Holidays ♥ Mysteria ♥ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
perhaps you would turn over that single whisper and look at where it was made and when then smile at the man of me as you place it there ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yea, that's nice!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend ____________ ms myst, thanks ms _____________ ms bluezy,,thanks for the "talk" |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I stir day dreams into my cup" strong dark sumatra in your cup Stranger darlin'? |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
"then smile at the man of me as you place it there on top of the many others in your collection" I guess it's all about being in love, being remembered, and then being replaced. Excellent. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady1, perhaps something warm to sip is the cure..thanks ms _________________ slowfall..thank you for the eyes and thoughts |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and for an instant I stir day dreams into my cup and wonder if you could taste those sounds I love these lines... what a wonderful image! *S* |
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