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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
The morning mist touched my face. Iced sweet tea satisfied my taste. Softly you walked behind me on the porch swing. And placed a sweet kiss upon my face. These are the moments that I treasure. There's nothing else on this earth that can measure. You are the rare diamond of my world. My creme of soda and ice cream swirl. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And do you put these sweet and love filled messages under her pillow at night, or next to her tea cup in the morning? Very lovely! Love, Margherita  |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
yes these are the moments we cherish, the everyday simple sweet gestures... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Affinity for the porch swing...sweet little write! |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Such a gentle and loving sweetness, Lamar. Fine and beautiful work here. Namaste Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I stumble over the softness sometimes in poetry like this, not because it needs anything, but because it reaches into a smile without words for the gentler moments in life that would mean so much less with no one to share them. KL |
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Laverne Pacquire Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96 |
Fancy Meeting you, here. I think I know you.. good poem! |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
If only that kiss had been placed upon your neck. |
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