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Monday Morning Thoughts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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It's hidden in the "between the lines" of aging: either fear or contentment where traditions of old are imprisoned in the mind where each step forward is a reminder of yesterday where peacefulness crawls under a coverlet of dreams where security is holding onto one's self where the wondering is daily and the unknown is always... a moment away. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Profound ponderings, dear Maureen. In a way it is exciting that the "unknown is always just moments away ...". We are in the flow, wrapped in dreams, past and hopes and an ever present veil of melancholy ... We ARE! Enjoyed your beautiful poem very much. Love, Margherita |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
nakdthoughts: Your Muse today is full of philosophical musings. Thoughtful piece of art that I find just a little depressing: it has an autumn feel to it...sort of the sadness of winter's onset without the hope of spring. Nicely done. Peace Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"where peacefulness crawls under a coverlet of dreams" ~ Let me keep that thought! ~ and recall it every night as I slip off to slumber...  I enjoy reading your contemplative ponderings. I undersand them. Sweet dreams!   Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts on a Monday morning...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Maureen, that is a very thought evoking post written with a lot of thought. Much enjoyed, well done, love Lindsay |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It is now Tuesday morning, and I thank you for the kind responses. If seeming a bit depressing, it is only because lately I am realizing my time that is left... M |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This poem has some lovely, and very memorable, lines, Maureen. I think I will keep this one. Ida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Ida, glad you enjoyed M |
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