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Open Poetry #45
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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
Posts 96
0 posted 2009-11-15 08:12 PM

The beauty of long winters,
Thoughtfully, eyes move.

At first, tears settle;
Falling heavenly;
Upon the face that is
looking back at you in the glass.

Into the moment like shattering glass -
Never touching love and bitter words.
© Copyright 2009 Laverne Pacquire - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-11-15 08:54 PM

Yo Laverne,

Welcome to the forum.  Your poems are strangly interesting.  I'm trying to figure them out.

Love Bobby
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2009-11-16 05:33 AM

Leaves me thinking about  "the face staring back"

M
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-11-16 05:34 PM

Enjoyed...James
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