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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
He saw her with her black umbrella, standing like a Juliette on a canvas, next to the rain and church like a missing shirt to the winter morning. She stood closely uncomfortable, her black eyeliner couldn't lie any longer, couldn't cover her tears as the church bells unearthed the deathly minute Of the window sill sitting, and waiting for the rain to stop so she could stand at the knees of her mother, the knees of a rainless afternoon. |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
What a picture you have painted. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Appreciate the comments. Tomer |
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